text langage poetry

Text language sure is fun to suss out.

Shortly after writing "No Broom" I read the lord of the rings and was inspired to write another poem. However after so many attempts at perfecting "No Broom" I didn't have any paper left so best I could do was to use the cellhone I was given (See I told you I didn't need any inane attempt to help build a phone)

Sent the message off the the publishers but still awaiting a reply. See what you think.

Zarp Tangol's Txt Poem

D elfs r n d w%ds
W their capes n h%ds
d bait n bads n g%ds
n ll d shan'ts n sh%ds

D elfs av now lft de w%ds
hom 2 hng der h%ds
dey now no frm bads n g%ds
n of ll d shan’ts n sh%ds :)